OK, I really like the premise of this game, and I think it has potential, but the execution is highly flawed.
First of all, the Unity engine is bad. Unity doesn't even allow you to scroll the text backwards if you accidentally advance it too early, and saving your game is weird. You should use Renpy instead. Renpy doesn't have those problems. I gave up on the game when I attempted to save, failed, and lost about 14 days of progress. If this was a Renpy game, I wouldn't have had that problem. But anyway...
Second, the art isn't very good. The succubus character isn't even sexy. I love the idea of the financial domination inherent in this game, but a financial dominatrix has to be, you know, sexy, or else it just doesn't work. And while 2D art can be sexy, it is possible, it would be much better if you just used realistic 3D renders.
Thirdly, the handjob interface is just weird. It's not very clear what you're supposed to do or how. I would either make that a lot more clear or just completely reimagine how those scenes play out.
Fourthly, there just aren't enough things to do. If you want to make 90+ percent of the game in this single room, that's fine, but you should make more things happen in the room. More interactions with the female character, more FemDom scenes, more bondage and discipline, more humiliation, more cuckolding, lots of options. Not just "we went to the park," "we saw a movie," etc. Will that stuff be coming in future updates? If not, I can help you with some ideas...
But anyway, I'll be keeping an eye on this game, because the premise and some of the writing is really good, and there just aren't enough games that focus on FinDom. Thank you.
I used unity engine because i'm already familiar with the programming language it uses and Live2d, the one I used for animations works very well with it. For the dialogue backtrack option, I think it's very possible to implement and i'll be looking for ways to do it. I'm very sorry for your lost save, if you could provide details on how it happened I can find ways so it will never happen again.
For the art, I know my art is still very amateurish. It's actually one of the reasons why I started making this game as well. It urges me to keep challenging myself and try out new things, so it pretty much pushes me out of my comfort zone for every art I do for this game.
The portrait for the dialogue was actually made last year, and the handjob scene might even be a few months older than that. I think I made great progress so far but i'm still not really that satisfied with my current level so i'm constantly practicing so I can make the characters more erotic in the future. I've actually been thinking about redoing the dialogue portrait but held off against it for now because I wanted to focus on adding more content into the game.
In the handjob scene in this page's current version(0.1), there's actually an issue with the tutorial not showing when you pressed the question mark button on the top right of the scene. It's already fixed on the 0.2 version which would be out this month. I did include an image for that tutorial in the download files but i'm currently cooking up ways to make things clearer for future updates.
For your fourth point, the goal I have for this game(and for future games) is for the simulation part to complement the joi scenes and vice-versa. The plan is when you progress in the simulation part, like Interacting with the heroine, earning money, unlocking new stuff, etc. Should allow the player to have a variety of new things they could experience in the joi part while still making the simulation experience enjoyable.
In the 0.2 update(which honestly should've been the base release), I added the "mood" and "nutrition" mechanic which affects the H scene. Mood basically changes how the heroine treats you during the H scene(different dialogue and different sets of animations). Nutrition determines how long or short the joi part is going to be. I also added a new shop that can be unlocked after progressing in the story that allows you to buy items that you can use in the joi part to help the players survive long enough.
I do very much agree that there needs to be more interaction with the heroine, though. What kind of interaction are you specifically looking for? More daily-life interactions, or spicy stuff? Because I do plan on adding more h-scenes in the future. In the latest update(0.3) i'm currently working on, i'm making a penalty scene for when the player fails to survive the handjob scene which would replace the handjob scene, or any weekly joi scene that I plan to add in the future.
I'm also thinking of making some scenes non-joi, something you can unlock when the player progress their relationship or by meeting certain conditions, and the usual joi ones. I'm very much open for new ideas so if you have anything in mind, please do let me know.
Lastly, i'm very much surprised that you liked at least some of my writing lmao. It's one the things that i'm expecting to receive criticism along with my art, among other things. Which part of it did you like? Again, thank you very much for your in-depth feedback. I really appreciate comments like these.
I can't remember any specifics because I already deleted the game from my hard drive, but I like a lot of the things the succubus said. FinDom is a very niche fetish that not many enjoy, but I do, and I appreciate any game that contains that aspect. And I'm not saying your art isn't cute, and it would probably work great for a comic strip or a kids' cartoon, but it's just not sexy. It doesn't make me want to jerk off the way a really well-done 3D render does. Look at my DeviantArt page (same username), both my own images and the ones I've favorited. You'll see what I'm talking about... But I can imagine a lot more FemDom stuff happening in this context. Like I said previously, scenes that involve bondage and discipline, humiliation, cuckolding, chastity, feminization/sissification, pegging/forced bi... Heck, the only limit is your own imagination. I mean, if nothing else, chastity has to be involved, because she made a big deal about him not whacking it between their handjob sessions, so you HAVE TO include chastity at some point, right?
Hello! The plan is to push out monthly updates but i'm currently gauging how much content I can make in a month so we'll see. What would you like to see in a new update? Thanks for commenting!
the points you have for the next update sounds good. But maybe in the future some chastity when you came to early etc. some cei could also be fun but maybe with options to enable or disable because its not for everyone.
Those sounds pretty good. I'll definitely consider them for future updates! Though i'm gonna need some clarifications in what you mean by chastity. Because if you're talking about outside the game, It might be difficult to implement as you could technically trigger a new H scene for every in-game week.
Out side would be fun to but i think in game works better here. like came to early lockedup for the week and will be teased in some evenings or locked for more than one week and the succubus unlocks after a week teases you and lock you back up.
some random thoughts at the moment. could talk about that n discord if you want.
This looks promising If you keep on with updating your game ! The artstyle is exactly the same as "Code Yoko" a very famous animated series in the 2000s Do you plan to add anal kink? Also , hello From France
Hi! I've never heard that series before but I looked it up and they even made games for it! For anal kinks, I do plan for adding a sex scene in the future with multiple options but for now, i'll be focusing on pov handjob scenes.
Mostly femdom, edging, orgasm denial, etc. For tags i'll lean heavily into handjobs and toys but the plan is to have multiple "personalities" for each H-scene sessions so i'm open to more ideas!
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What a great game , last time I played It I fapped for over 30 minutes
Thank you!
OK, I really like the premise of this game, and I think it has potential, but the execution is highly flawed.
First of all, the Unity engine is bad. Unity doesn't even allow you to scroll the text backwards if you accidentally advance it too early, and saving your game is weird. You should use Renpy instead. Renpy doesn't have those problems. I gave up on the game when I attempted to save, failed, and lost about 14 days of progress. If this was a Renpy game, I wouldn't have had that problem. But anyway...
Second, the art isn't very good. The succubus character isn't even sexy. I love the idea of the financial domination inherent in this game, but a financial dominatrix has to be, you know, sexy, or else it just doesn't work. And while 2D art can be sexy, it is possible, it would be much better if you just used realistic 3D renders.
Thirdly, the handjob interface is just weird. It's not very clear what you're supposed to do or how. I would either make that a lot more clear or just completely reimagine how those scenes play out.
Fourthly, there just aren't enough things to do. If you want to make 90+ percent of the game in this single room, that's fine, but you should make more things happen in the room. More interactions with the female character, more FemDom scenes, more bondage and discipline, more humiliation, more cuckolding, lots of options. Not just "we went to the park," "we saw a movie," etc. Will that stuff be coming in future updates? If not, I can help you with some ideas...
But anyway, I'll be keeping an eye on this game, because the premise and some of the writing is really good, and there just aren't enough games that focus on FinDom. Thank you.
Hello! Thank you for the very detailed feedback.
I used unity engine because i'm already familiar with the programming language it uses and Live2d, the one I used for animations works very well with it. For the dialogue backtrack option, I think it's very possible to implement and i'll be looking for ways to do it. I'm very sorry for your lost save, if you could provide details on how it happened I can find ways so it will never happen again.
For the art, I know my art is still very amateurish. It's actually one of the reasons why I started making this game as well. It urges me to keep challenging myself and try out new things, so it pretty much pushes me out of my comfort zone for every art I do for this game.
The portrait for the dialogue was actually made last year, and the handjob scene might even be a few months older than that. I think I made great progress so far but i'm still not really that satisfied with my current level so i'm constantly practicing so I can make the characters more erotic in the future. I've actually been thinking about redoing the dialogue portrait but held off against it for now because I wanted to focus on adding more content into the game.
In the handjob scene in this page's current version(0.1), there's actually an issue with the tutorial not showing when you pressed the question mark button on the top right of the scene. It's already fixed on the 0.2 version which would be out this month. I did include an image for that tutorial in the download files but i'm currently cooking up ways to make things clearer for future updates.
For your fourth point, the goal I have for this game(and for future games) is for the simulation part to complement the joi scenes and vice-versa. The plan is when you progress in the simulation part, like Interacting with the heroine, earning money, unlocking new stuff, etc. Should allow the player to have a variety of new things they could experience in the joi part while still making the simulation experience enjoyable.
In the 0.2 update(which honestly should've been the base release), I added the "mood" and "nutrition" mechanic which affects the H scene. Mood basically changes how the heroine treats you during the H scene(different dialogue and different sets of animations). Nutrition determines how long or short the joi part is going to be. I also added a new shop that can be unlocked after progressing in the story that allows you to buy items that you can use in the joi part to help the players survive long enough.
I do very much agree that there needs to be more interaction with the heroine, though. What kind of interaction are you specifically looking for? More daily-life interactions, or spicy stuff? Because I do plan on adding more h-scenes in the future. In the latest update(0.3) i'm currently working on, i'm making a penalty scene for when the player fails to survive the handjob scene which would replace the handjob scene, or any weekly joi scene that I plan to add in the future.
I'm also thinking of making some scenes non-joi, something you can unlock when the player progress their relationship or by meeting certain conditions, and the usual joi ones. I'm very much open for new ideas so if you have anything in mind, please do let me know.
Lastly, i'm very much surprised that you liked at least some of my writing lmao. It's one the things that i'm expecting to receive criticism along with my art, among other things. Which part of it did you like? Again, thank you very much for your in-depth feedback. I really appreciate comments like these.
I can't remember any specifics because I already deleted the game from my hard drive, but I like a lot of the things the succubus said. FinDom is a very niche fetish that not many enjoy, but I do, and I appreciate any game that contains that aspect. And I'm not saying your art isn't cute, and it would probably work great for a comic strip or a kids' cartoon, but it's just not sexy. It doesn't make me want to jerk off the way a really well-done 3D render does. Look at my DeviantArt page (same username), both my own images and the ones I've favorited. You'll see what I'm talking about... But I can imagine a lot more FemDom stuff happening in this context. Like I said previously, scenes that involve bondage and discipline, humiliation, cuckolding, chastity, feminization/sissification, pegging/forced bi... Heck, the only limit is your own imagination. I mean, if nothing else, chastity has to be involved, because she made a big deal about him not whacking it between their handjob sessions, so you HAVE TO include chastity at some point, right?
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The rar file contains both windows and android versions!
do you have a plan when new things coming
looks promising
Hello! The plan is to push out monthly updates but i'm currently gauging how much content I can make in a month so we'll see. What would you like to see in a new update? Thanks for commenting!
the points you have for the next update sounds good. But maybe in the future some chastity when you came to early etc. some cei could also be fun but maybe with options to enable or disable because its not for everyone.
Those sounds pretty good. I'll definitely consider them for future updates! Though i'm gonna need some clarifications in what you mean by chastity. Because if you're talking about outside the game, It might be difficult to implement as you could technically trigger a new H scene for every in-game week.
Out side would be fun to but i think in game works better here. like came to early lockedup for the week and will be teased in some evenings or locked for more than one week and the succubus unlocks after a week teases you and lock you back up.
some random thoughts at the moment.
could talk about that n discord if you want.
yeah let's talk in discord
This looks promising If you keep on with updating your game !
The artstyle is exactly the same as "Code Yoko" a very famous animated series in the 2000s
Do you plan to add anal kink?
Also , hello From France
Hi! I've never heard that series before but I looked it up and they even made games for it! For anal kinks, I do plan for adding a sex scene in the future with multiple options but for now, i'll be focusing on pov handjob scenes.
Nice !
Don't forget , don't work too hard on yourself : )
Thank you! Much love <3
What kinds for fetishes are you planning on?
Mostly femdom, edging, orgasm denial, etc. For tags i'll lean heavily into handjobs and toys but the plan is to have multiple "personalities" for each H-scene sessions so i'm open to more ideas!